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[lttng-docs.git] / contents / using-lttng / controlling-tracing / enabling-disabling-channels / intro.md

diff --git a/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/enabling-disabling-channels/intro.md b/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/enabling-disabling-channels/intro.md
index a6b884e5b280ceda256bb6413e23ccbc98e96cc9..676d4ba570658b89ed9d7ff5a02c4261d909dda0 100644 (file)
--- a/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/enabling-disabling-channels/intro.md
+++ b/contents/using-lttng/controlling-tracing/enabling-disabling-channels/intro.md
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ id: enabling-disabling-channels
 events are contained in a specific channel, itself contained in a
 specific tracing session. A channel is a group of events with
 tunable parameters (event loss mode, sub-buffer size, number of
-sub-buffers, trace file sizes and count, etc.). A given channel may
-only be responsible for enabled events belonging to one domain: either
-kernel or user space.
+sub-buffers, trace file sizes and count, to name a few). A given channel
+may only be responsible for enabled events belonging to one domain:
+either kernel or user space.
 
 If you only used the `create`, `enable-event` and `start`/`stop`
 commands of the `lttng` tool so far, one or two channels were
@@ -31,14 +31,14 @@ To create and enable a channel, use the `enable-channel` command:
 lttng enable-channel --kernel my-channel
 </pre>
 
-This will create a kernel domain channel named `my-channel` with
+This creates a kernel domain channel named `my-channel` with
 default parameters in the current tracing session.
 
 <div class="tip">
 <p>
     <span class="t">Note:</span>Because of a current limitation, all
     channels must be <em>created</em> prior to beginning tracing in a
-    given tracing session, i.e. before the first time you do
+    given tracing session, that is before the first time you do
     <code>lttng start</code>.
 </p>
 <p>
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ lttng enable-channel --userspace --session other-session --overwrite \
                      --tracefile-size 1048576 1mib-channel
 </pre>
 
-This will create a user space domain channel named `1mib-channel` in
+This creates a user space domain channel named `1mib-channel` in
 the tracing session named `other-session` that loses new events by
 overwriting previously recorded events (instead of the default mode of
 discarding newer ones) and saves trace files with a maximum size of
@@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ lttng enable-event --userspace --channel my-channel app:tp
 lttng enable-event --userspace --channel other-channel app:tp
 </pre>
 
-If both channels are enabled, the occurring `app:tp` event will
-generate two recorded events, one for each channel.
+If both channels are enabled, the occurring `app:tp` event
+generates two recorded events, one for each channel.
 
 Disabling a channel is done with the `disable-event` command: